Karin: The fox heroine

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May 13th, 2019, 9:40 pm
Finally it's done, geez.
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Flavia-Elric May 13th, 2019, 9:40 pm
Thanks for reading! Hmm... I though a lot about what to write here. lol
First of all, let me rant about how this end was rushed. I was supposed to show their trip to the Vechi temple and, of course, the dungeon adventure in the said temple! Also, it's kind of sad I couldn't show more of the relationship of Karin and Ícaro, they were supposed to be really close, since they both were raised by the elders to keep Umbra under control. I like to see them as stepsiblings! Also, it's not clear in the comic how Ícaro discovered about Karin being Umbra, nor if the elders really knew or not. Just like the story resolution, I'll leave it up to your imagination. What else... As a short comic I didn't get to show much about how magic works, which I never had a proper planning anyway. Also, there's the colored eyes thing in early pages, it was supposed to happen to the characters everytime they used magic! Except no one used any magic later...

Welp, thanks for reading!! I'm happy that I could finish it, even if it has a lot of things I dislike. At least I know what to avoid now! Also... Feel free to drop a comment about what you liked and disliked! Feedbacks are appreciated! hehe

That's it. Thanks again :>
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YolkenEgg May 13th, 2019, 9:43 pm
This was messy and unpolished. The art was good, most of the dialogue was good, some was clunky. It was a nice comic visually, but plotwise, I think you nailed it yourself.

It's a learning experience to do comics and I think most often people mess up more than they succeed, conveying scenes and moments in simple frames is just so complicated and you either nail it, or you don't.
fabioshaka May 13th, 2019, 9:57 pm
All i gave to say is that im crying loved the revelation about karin being umbra ad that icaro love her and her tears ate the farewell maybe it was a short comic but will live forever in my heart
timelordforlife May 14th, 2019, 12:07 am
choud there be a sequel or was this a one shot story becose i would love to see a sequel to this story and i know others would too
Flavia-Elric May 14th, 2019, 6:31 am
@timelordforlife: Sadly I don't have any plans for it. Maybe... in a distant future. lol
Toxicodendron May 14th, 2019, 4:17 pm
@Flavia-Elric: I just can't fully accept this being the end, I really want some closure so hopefully you do eventually make a sequel and leave a link here so that in a few years (maybe even a decade or two for those still around this part of the internet) rereading the comic that it will be there. Unfortunately that likely will not happen, so I hope my imagination does a good job.
silver moon :3 May 14th, 2019, 6:57 am
Noice story
GearTech147 May 14th, 2019, 3:16 pm
LOVE IT
Cshaffer23 May 15th, 2019, 7:36 am
Snif snif 🤭🥺
Darvin May 16th, 2019, 5:13 am
The only thing I don't like in this comic is that it ended.
Lucarvee May 17th, 2019, 6:52 am
@Darvin: The worst part of any story, is that all stories must end...
Rainmon May 19th, 2019, 7:15 am
I think comic was fine. Art was great, but story was interesting too. Well the end does seem a bit rushed but it was, so thats nothing strange.
It would be nice to read more, but the most important thing is that you accually finished this giving readers a clear ending. The most sad things is when internet comic just stop being updated with no info and became abandoned in the middle of things happening.
jaketheflareon231 June 26th, 2019, 9:26 am
this is the greatest comic ever pls let there be a part 2!
Woo August 14th, 2019, 3:08 pm
I just read through this for the first time, and I gotta say that I'm actually very impressed with how this story is handled in such a short timeframe! I can't imagine ever pulling off a comic that had these sorts of stakes in only 36 pages. It gave me really nice nostalgic vibes of one-off mangas I would read as a kid!
Guest September 9th, 2019, 7:02 pm
Wut
Murp October 4th, 2019, 6:18 pm
I'm pretty saddened by how this ended so abruptly... I can only bet that this ended as it seemed it would... Plus I JUST noticed that You were also the Author of Yet another PMD comic!
Tanzeel97@hotmail.com November 2nd, 2019, 1:25 am
It’d be a really good comic if it was stretched and and they realised that she was umbra later in the story not at the beginning